Angel of Death

Hey there! Haven't read anything of yours in a while. I quite like this. It has this Alternative feel to it and I like the story that this tells and ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS, I'm Angel of Death but you can call me Angel. I really am on two sides of the fence with this one. I liked it ...

Hello there! I haven't seen you around here before. I'm Angel of Death but everyone calls me Angel *shakes hand* I quite like this but the latter of this seems ...

Hey Ash! sad! Though I never really liked Carmen, now that made him different I can't help but feel sorry for him. Why can't they be together? Why? *takes a ...

Awe darn, I always come late! All I can say is that I liked this. It was funny and a little bit disturbing as I'm bout to eat lunch and ...

Alas, I've come to the last chapter, but parting is such sweet chapter. I have no nit-picks or complaints for that matter, about this chapter. I liked it and it's ...

Ah, I hate being the last to critique, I feel like I'm only repeating everyone else. I liked this chapter a lot but I stand firm and direct when I ...

I was going to go back to reading Tipping the Velvet but I couldn't resist. This was brilliant one of the best things I've read on YWS. As someone before ...

Hello again! I just thought I'd check this out while I'm camping in Other Fiction. A good piece of flash fiction this is. Listen to Nate, he's a very smart ...

Another good chapter! A few nit-picks: “That is that,” Mr Murdoch said firmly. “You will come with us, my dear, and welcome to.” When they arrived at Coal Yard Alley, ...

I am really liking your story. Your dialog and descriptions are improved and I like to see improvement. I love your characters and everything about this story. I certainly wasn't ...

'Ello Sarah. I like Victorian and Regency era stories, so I quite enjoyed this. The nit-picks were already pointed out but I will say that I think your execution could ...

Hey there! Your title is what dragged me here, as I just love vampires and I thought it was going to be the beginning of your typical vampire love story ...

Hey niccy_v! Hmm, this wasn't terrible but for a prologue this can be better. It was executed fairly well but for the beginnings of a story of this caliber this ...

Hey there! First I would like to say that I appreciate your patience. It's sad that no one reviewed this for about twenty four days, but to tell you the ...